This is a strong start for a “good piece” — the core idea of focusing on (likely a character, perhaps from a show like The L Word or a fan fiction / original universe?) and Ramona (possibly a partner or rival) has clear potential.
This is a strong start for a “good piece” — the core idea of focusing on (likely a character, perhaps from a show like The L Word or a fan fiction / original universe?) and Ramona (possibly a partner or rival) has clear potential.